Which composition feels more attractive, why? × Knwo× knwo
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?
堵车真是糟糕透了。 (1) Every day, to have a traffic jam is very bad for me (2) Every day, traffic jam is a disaster for me.
(凭长相发工资)这条消息让王老师喜 上眉梢，让李老师瞬间崩溃。 This news is a blessing for Mr. Wang while it is a disaster for Mr. Li.
Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers
长峡托孤月。 (1)The long straits are lying under the lonely moon.
(2) Lying under the lonely moon are the long straits.
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings
1. good 2. think
perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in one's opinion/view hold the view that … it is widely shared that …
be fond of,be crazy about
感叹句 e.g. What a kind boy he is!
How disappointed he was !
强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that
helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.
e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.
with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.
定语从句 eg. In my view, bookstore
should be a place where we can find much useful information. eg. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.
e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.
A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.
1.He got excited when he heard the news. Hearing → ___ the news, he got excited.（doing作状语）
2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. Hungry and thirsty the girl went home.（adj作状语） →_________________, 3.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden.
He was watering flowers. Early in the morning ,Mr Smith was watering___________ in the garden → _______________ （把三个简单融合成一句话）
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. How glad →_____________we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! (感叹句）
2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began （强调句 →It was__________________________________. 3.He never speaks about his own family. does he speak about his own family →Never_________________________________. (倒装句）
4.A boy stood outside the classroom. stood a boy. →Outside the classroom_____________________. （倒装句）
5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child though/as he is, he knows a lot
时间先后： first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系： but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系： because, since, as,for, thanks to, owing to, as a result of 让步关系： though, although, even if, even though 递进关系： what’s more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系： if, unless, as long as, on condition that … 表 列 举： for instance, take…for example, That’s to say, in other words, as follows 表 总 结： in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,
(1) The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Every minute, therefore, should be made full use of .
(2) The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Therefore ,every minute should be made full use of .
Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life … A The reasons why they do so are as follows . _______, they hope to look smart and special. _______, they want to D win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . As far as I am concerned , we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily C , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket life . _____ money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in B rural areas can return to school.______, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening! A. Firstly B. Last but not least C. What’s more D. Secondly
小结： 1. 作文的卷面-----卷面整洁 要点齐全 2.作文的语言 -----词汇丰富 句型多变 3. 作文的流畅-----结构流畅 一气呵成
Reading ? As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere. (Introduction) ? Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public. (Advantages) ? Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.(Disadvantages) ? I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. ( My opinion) (86words)
Appreciating the polished work With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads. Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public. However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed. As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.