高考英语作文如何使用高级词汇和高级句子_图文

Writing
高考英语写作高分策略

Which composition feels more attractive, why? × Knwo× knwo

影响给分的因素之一:作文的卷面

书写规范 段落合理

要点齐全 字数要齐

Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?



堵车真是糟糕透了。 (1) Every day, to have a traffic jam is very bad for me (2) Every day, traffic jam is a disaster for me.
活学活用 当堂练习

(凭长相发工资)这条消息让王老师喜 上眉梢,让李老师瞬间崩溃。 This news is a blessing for Mr. Wang while it is a disaster for Mr. Li.

Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers

长峡托孤月。 (1)The long straits are lying under the lonely moon.



(2) Lying under the lonely moon are the long straits.

影响给分的因素之二:
文中所采用的语言材料

人靠衣装,文靠词装
A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖,出奇制胜;
B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;

Practice
Find some similar words or phrases of the followings

1. good 2. think

perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent in one's opinion/view hold the view that … it is widely shared that …

3.like

love,enjoy,adore,fancy,
be fond of,be crazy about

常用到的句型结构 请判断句子类型
感叹句 e.g. What a kind boy he is!

How disappointed he was !
强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that

helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.

倒装句

省略句

e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the police car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary.

with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.

定语从句 eg. In my view, bookstore

should be a place where we can find much useful information. eg. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
各种名词性从句

e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.

各种状语从句

e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we reached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, we’ll catch up sooner or later.

改变句子结构 与众不同
1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.

改变句子语序,实现句子形式多样化
1.He got excited when he heard the news. Hearing → ___ the news, he got excited.(doing作状语)

2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. Hungry and thirsty the girl went home.(adj作状语) →_________________, 3.It was early in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden.

He was watering flowers. Early in the morning ,Mr Smith was watering___________ in the garden → _______________ (把三个简单融合成一句话)

使用强势句式,增强语句表现力
1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. How glad →_____________we were to see crops and vegetables growing well! (感叹句)

2. Radio broadcasts didn’t begin until 1920. not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began (强调句 →It was__________________________________. 3.He never speaks about his own family. does he speak about his own family →Never_________________________________. (倒装句)

4.A boy stood outside the classroom. stood a boy. →Outside the classroom_____________________. (倒装句)
5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. Child though/as he is, he knows a lot

影响给分的因素之三:行文的流畅
正确而巧妙地使用好连接词

正确使用有关连接词
时间先后: first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while 转折关系: but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless 因果关系: because, since, as,for, thanks to, owing to, as a result of 让步关系: though, although, even if, even though 递进关系: what’s more, in addition, furthermore on the one hand …on the other hand, 条件关系: if, unless, as long as, on condition that … 表 列 举: for instance, take…for example, That’s to say, in other words, as follows 表 总 结: in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a word,



(1) The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Every minute, therefore, should be made full use of .

(2) The deadline for our paper is tomorrow. Therefore ,every minute should be made full use of .

Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”. Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion. Some students live a very expensive life … A The reasons why they do so are as follows . _______, they hope to look smart and special. _______, they want to D win others’ admiration and respect. In addition, it makes them feel cool . As far as I am concerned , we students should hold the right sense of values. We should practice thrift in our daily C , it is advisable for us to donate some pocket life . _____ money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in B rural areas can return to school.______, it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance that makes us respectable. Thank you for listening! A. Firstly B. Last but not least C. What’s more D. Secondly

小结: 1. 作文的卷面-----卷面整洁 要点齐全 2.作文的语言 -----词汇丰富 句型多变 3. 作文的流畅-----结构流畅 一气呵成

Reading ? As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere. (Introduction) ? Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public. (Advantages) ? Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.(Disadvantages) ? I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. ( My opinion) (86words)

Appreciating the polished work With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads. Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public. However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed. As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods.

(123 words)


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